



John Heemeyer
Jan 29, 2025
Heart of Challenge
Act 1: The first Challenger.
In the boundless expanse of the Void Before Time, where existence was a dream yet to be spun, Kanna shaped the multiverse’s tapestry. His essence was a whirlwind of light and shadow, his countless hands threading the fragile strands of life, death, time, and potential into a vast, intricate weave. The Void thrummed with his labor, a symphony of creation where timelines branched like rivers, each a world pulsing with possibility. Kanna had crafted pillars before—Thanatos to balance death and entropy, Chronos to guard time’s relentless flow, Asthéneia to guide rot and decay—but the tapestry now showed signs of stagnation. In some threads, life drifted without drive, species content in complacency, their growth halted like a flame starved of air.
Kanna’s eyes, infinite as stars, narrowed. Life needed fire, a spark to ignite ambition, to push boundaries and forge wisdom through trial. Now was the time to birth competition and drive. From the Void’s core, she drew a vibrant thread of rivalry—crimson and gold, crackling with energy—and wove it into a being of pure challenge.
Próklisi opened his eyes to the roar of a heart that refused to yield. He knelt in the Timeless Limbo on knees of living magma, skin molten gold, hair a mane of solar fire. A crimson cloak fell about his shoulders, and as he looked up he felt a mask of porcelain upon his face. Kanna stood above him, barefoot as always, eyes older than victory. “Who am I?” he asked.
“You are the Fourth, You are Próklisi,” Kanna replied, her voice a loom’s rhythmic hum, weaving purpose into his core. “You are my will made manifest, the spark of competition. Across the multiverse, life grows lazy, its potential untapped. You will generate challenges—contests, rivalries, trials—to drive them to learn, adapt, and evolve. Forge them in strife, but do not shatter them. You are Competition, the game that builds empires and wisdom.”
Próklisi flexed, the flames of his hair flaring, golden skin gleaming. He felt the universe’s pulse, timelines calling like arenas awaiting a match. “Challenges? Games? I was born for this!” he laughed, his voice a thunderclap of delight.
Kanna granted him insight into life’s potential—the myriad ways a contest could spark innovation, resilience, or unity—but warned him sternly. “Challenge, Próklisi, but temper your zeal. Too much rivalry breeds destruction, unraveling the tapestry I weave. Balance is key, as it is for your siblings.”
Próklisi tilted his head, flames dancing. “Thanatos? Asthéneia? Chronos? The death-bringers and the clockwork bore?” He had sensed their essences in the Void—Thanatos’s empathetic shadow, Chronos’s cold precision, Asthéneia’s twisted form of art —but they were mere spectators to his games. “Let them prune and tick. I’ll make life roar!”
Kanna’s laughter was a cascade of chimes. “Your fire is a gift, Próklisi, but fire consumes if unchecked. Go now, and ignite the tapestry. But remember: competition is growth, not ruin.” Then Kanna was simply gone.
Próklisi needed no further urging. He surged into the Void, his form a comet of crimson and gold, eager to craft his first challenges. The multiverse was his arena, and life his players—let the games begin!
A strand shimmered—clear, perfect, singing in one unbroken note of contentment. He followed the note. He stepped onto Vitrara, a desert world of living glass beneath a sky of pale rose. The dunes were translucent quartz; the wind carved them into ever-shifting sculptures that caught and refracted starlight into rainbows. Its inhabitants were the Vitroli, winged beings with prismatic scales. They drifted in slow, graceful flocks, merging and separating their colors in perfect, wordless agreement.
No one was faster. No one shined brighter nor duller. No one had ever tried.
Próklisi landed in the heart of the largest dune-sea, feet sinking into warm glass-sand. The Vitroli greeted him with a gentle chorus of harmonious hues. “Golden-runner-upon-the-dunes, why do you stand apart? Our light is complete.”
Próklisi’s smile widened until it lit the desert brighter than noon. He raised both arms and spoke words that fractured the sky into a thousand racing rainbows: “Let the race – Begin!”
The Vitroli looked at him and one another in confusion, unsure of what he meant. What was a race? Begin? What was about to begin? They began to approach him to ask these questions, but Próklisi was already in motion. He drew the course with a fingertip of sunlight across the dunes – a spiral of light-bridges that arched and twisted through the air, vanishing into mirage and reappearing farther on.
The rules were simple, beautiful, kind. Race to the center. First to touch the prism-heart wins. No touching another’s scales or wings. No dimming another’s light. Only speed, only brilliance, only joy.
The Vitroli hesitated—then flared with curiosity. One Vitroli, the smallest spark of curiosity running down it’s scaled wings, detached from the flock and shot forward, leaving a trail of sapphire. Another followed—emerald, then topaz, then amethyst. Within moments the desert blazed with racing color. They laughed in pure harmonic tones as they discovered speed, discovered shortcuts, discovered the exquisite ache of trying.
Próklisi ran among them—not competing, only cheering, guiding, catching any that stumbled and setting it gently back on the course. That first Vitroli, the curious one that had made the first wing-beat, reached the prism-heart first. The moment her scales and prism touched, the entire course exploded into a celebratory aurora that lit Vitrara for a thousand kilometers.
Other Vitroli gathered around her, not envious, but shining brighter because she had shown them what was possible. They begged for another race, then another, and another. Days became weeks of pure delight.
They invented new contests: Duels of refraction—who could split a single beam into the most colors. Endurance trials—who could hold the clearest note while racing the wind. Cooperative relays where flocks passed a single beam of light from scale to scale without letting it fade.
Every victory was celebrated.
Every defeat was studied, laughed over, turned into the seed of the next attempt. Próklisi sat one evening on the tallest dune, legs dangling over a drop of liquid starlight, watching a hundred Vitroli weave a living rainbow that spelled THANK YOU across the sky. One Vitroli drifted up beside him, their scales now shot through with proud new facets, damage yes, but proudly worn. “You gave us questions,” it said, voice chiming like crystal bells. “Before you, we were beautiful. Now we are becoming.”
Próklisi’s heart—bright, curious, endlessly hopeful—felt fuller than it ever had. He placed a hand on it’s shell. “This is why I exist,” he said softly. “To watch you reach.”
That night, as the Vitroli slept in glowing clusters, Próklisi walked alone to the edge of the desert. He looked back at the gentle, laughing lights and felt the first tiny shadow. What if someone reached too far? What if “better” ever became “best at any cost”? He shook his head, laughing at himself. Competition was gentle flame, not a dangerous inferno. Growth required trust. He would always be there to guide it.
He turned toward the dark between worlds, already eager for the next strand, the next question, the next bright beginning. Behind him, Vitrara’s new rainbows flickered once—curious, playful, innocent. The Fourth Pillar had found his joy, and looked now to the other strands so that it could be shared.
Act 2: The bolt that would strike.
The next tug came from a strand filled with the hum of electricity. Elyndra was a gas giant, it’s atmosphere filled with clouds so thick mortal eyes could not see more than scant inches from their face, winds pushed violently causing what little solid ground existed to be thrown through the air at speeds that would crush bone. But Próklisi was no mortal, and the inhabitants of Elyndra saw without eyes. They called themselves the Zelyn, sentient beings of living plasma born from Elyndra’s storms. They had no bodies— they existed only as coils of pure plasma, voices that boomed like thunder, they felt the electromagnetic field of their world to know their way.
The Zelyn lived in perfect harmonic storms: every Zelyn willingly surrendered individuality to merge into larger, more beautiful tempests. No struggle. No rivalry.Only the Great Cyclones—eternal, serene, smug. Próklisi landed on the largest of the flying stones, feet sizzling against the ground. One Great Cyclone greeted him with a gentle roll of thunder. ”Solid thing that bends and burns, why have you come?”
“To bring competition and strength, so that you may become greater than what you are.” Próklisi responded, his voice carrying through the howl of the wind.
The Great Cyclone spun with a fury, spitting out a bolt of plasma that struck a flying stone with such force that it became dust. “What need have we of your strength? We are already strong as one!”
Próklisi considered this before responding, “It is true you are powerful together. You are the sum of many who are weak alone. What I offer would make them strong alone, so that when you are one they will bring you greater strength.”
“Show us.”
With the Great Cyclone’s permission, Próklisi went about setting up a testing field of flying rocks and debris. There were a few tests for those who would participate. Some to blast apart the stones as they flew past, some to channel their own magnetic fields to pull the stones together into larger chunks. One area was a maze where the plasma bolts would have to leap from stone to stone to reach the end, those who made it in the fewest leaps would be the winners.
Próklisi spread his arms, “The arena is set. Now we need our players.”
The Zelyn within the Great Cyclone stirred, some curious, some excited. Individual bolts began to separate, tentatively attempting to take forms similar to the golden being before them. Then she arrived. A single bolt detached entirely and struck the stone Próklisi stood upon. It coalesced into the shape of a woman – tall, electric, wild-plasma arcing from her head as hair.
She spoke, “I am Mira. Let us see what your challenges provide.” She was beautiful the way a supernova is beautiful—dangerous, defiant, inevitable. Próklisi felt his fire stutter, so smitten by her appearance that he did not catch the confusion from the Great Cyclone as three other bolts of plasma finally took form, setting gently upon nearby stones.
Realizing his players were present, he explained the contests and had each present practice to show they understood what was to be done. He had kept the tests simple for a reason, they were meant to improve coordination, power, and speed… not their minds. It was clear that some of the players’ minds had become lesser once they separated from the Great Cyclone, often mixing up which task went with which testing arena.
Mira however, had no such difficulties. Whether through luck or attention, she was able to complete each task with ease, though the others were quick to follow her example. The Great Cyclone was pleased with what was before it. Clearly, this ‘Mira’ was above the others, so it released more to see if any could best her.
As the Zelyn competed to show their abilities, to prove their worth, the Great Cyclone, now greatly weakened from so many Zelyn having separated, came down close to Próklisi. “The value is recognized. Your representative presents a goal for my parts.”
Próklisi took his eyes off the field around him to look at the once Great Cyclone in confusion. “My… representative? What do you mean?”
The Cyclone spun in confusion before responding, “This Mira of yours, the one who appeared by your side? They are not of me and mine, they are… different.”
Próklisi looked back to the field, out at the Zelyn. It took him a moment to realize the difference. Mira was the only one with a feminine form, all the others appeared masculine, having tried to copy his own form. Then it dawned on him… none of the Zelyn, to include the Great Cyclone, had given their name except for Mira. “She is not…” he began, but was interrupted by a sudden blast from within the maze of floating stones.
One of the Zelyn had just jumped from one stone to another, but before it reached it’s target, the chosen stone had been obliterated by an unforeseen blast. Now, it was tumbling through the air trying to find something to latch onto so it could rebound back to the group, but nearly all the stones in the area had been pulled in for this event. It was quickly falling to the center of the Gas Giant, Próklisi realized that if it went too deep it would never be able to come out. He dove, pushing himself to fall faster, which considering his mass wasn’t all that difficult.
As he neared the falling Zelyn he called out, “Strike me, use me as the stone to return!” The Zelyn understood, lashing out to strike Próklisi full in the chest before bouncing back up to it’s brethren. Próklisi took the full brunt of the impact unfazed. He watched the Zelyn heading back up and simply stepped into Temporal Limbo, then stepped back into Elyndra ’s strand to stand next to the Great Cyclone once more.
He returned with a scowl of confusion, smoke from the heat and ionization of the impact still swirling from where he had been struck. A voice called out from within the contestants. Mira’s voice. “You call this challenge? If you want to be more than weather, fight for it. Not to be great combined, but for survival. For the right to say I, the right to be strong alone!”
The other Zelyn paused, confused. None of them knew which was the first bolt to strike another, but Próklisi saw. It was Mira. Próklisi moved to grab her, but the Zelyn had begun blasting at one another. Their lightning became blades, their thunder roared out “Betrayal!” but they were not focused on Próklisi, they turned on one another. What had once been a simple game, a contest, was quickly devolving into a battlefield. Islands shattered under plasma broadsides as the skies began to bleed violet fire.
Próklisi reached Mira, but before he could get a grip on her she struck him in the chest with a whip of electrical current. His crimson cloak smoked, his skin glowed. That had actually hurt. Stunned he looked at Mira. “This is what you wanted, isn’t it?” she snarled, “Real fire. Real risk. Strength and power on full display.”
He stared at her, furious and exhilarated. “Yes,” he admitted. “But not meaningless conflict.”
“Then give it meaning,” she said, stepping close enough that their plasmas mingled.“Make me immortal. Let me burn forever. Let me be the rival that makes your contests uncertain.”
For a moment Próklisi considered the proposal. Mira was beautiful, she was skilled, and … he touched his chest, where the pain from her strike still burned… she had power. More power than a mortal should have.
“No. Mortality is not yours to challenge,” he said, voice cracking like cooling iron.“It is the anvil on which greatness is forged. Without it, there is no victory worth having.”
Dara’s eyes flared white. “Then I will die the brightest death this world has ever seen.” She kissed him. Not gently. Lightning poured from her mouth into his… pure, wild, defiant current that burned them both white-hot. The kiss lasted an eternity and an instant.
When she pushed away, dropping to the Gas Giant’s core, her form was already unraveling, plasma scattering into a thousand dying bolts. She laughed all the way down.
Her final bolt struck Próklisi’s chest and carved her face into his memory and into the golden skin over his heart. She was gone. The war she had ignited raged on without her… beautiful, terrible, meaningless.
The Zelyn continued to fight for many minutes. Dozens fell and faded, their lives burned short by their own brethren. The Great Cyclone reformed, smaller, but more powerful. While it was saddened by the losses it witnessed, it was pleased to find that it was indeed stronger than before Próklisi’s arrival. “We thank you for showing us a path to strength.” It thundered.
Próklisi looked at the Great Cyclone, an edge of disbelief as he glanced to the fallen. “This… is not something you should thank me for.”
The Great Cyclone laughed, spinning off to tell the other Zelyn, to challenge, to fight… to wage war. Eryndra continued to drift through the weave, no longer silent as the thunder drums of war spread through the skies. Próklisi stood alone on a shattered island, hand pressed to the brand over his chest where Mira’s touch would never be forgotten.
He had wanted conflict with purpose. She had given him a war without end. He had wanted a rival. She had become a ghost. He looked at the ruined sky and spoke to the wind, “You win,” he said, voice raw.
Then he walked into the dark between worlds, leaving Eryndra to its endless, pointless lightning, carrying the first defeat he would be dealt, and the only face he would never forget.
After Eryndra, Próklisi walked the Weave with Mira’s face seared in his mind. Every victory tasted like ash. Every tournament he kindled rang hollow without her lightning laugh. He struck sparks harder, faster, desperate to drown the silence she had left. But always he held restraint, not letting his competitions turn to war. Not allowing a challenge turn to bloodshed.
On Crysthara, a lattice-world of large crystalline spiders, he turned their perfect communal webs into arenas of catch and release. “Do not take the least, aim only for the greatest of meals.”
The spiders wove their webs, they learned patience. They caught larger prey, fed well and in time they grew grand in size.
On Luminara, the Lumei had evolved to the point that they had begun crawling onto the shores. Próklisi challenged them to shape their colonies, to become giants that could walk with ease, not merely crawl. The Lumei remembered the colonies of old, and the darkness that followed. They refused to grow too large, but learned to cooperate, to explore their new surroundings. They began to build civilization on what little dry land was on their moon.
Soon a tug pulled at him from a strand that sang in wind and color. Próklisi followed it, stepping onto the world Aerithar, a windswept desert world dotted with the occasional oasis. It’s inhabitants, the Arun, were large flightless birds that ran across the dunes, darting from oasis to oasis. Próklisi smiled, they reminded him of the Vitroli. A simple inspiration, present another race, but for distance this time not speed.
The Arun dashed around him as he worked, cautiously watching, unsure what he was doing. One of them slowed, prancing around Próklisi as it squawked, “Golden stone in the sands, why do you linger?”
Próklisi laughed before responding, “I linger to give you a gift.”
“A gift?” another Arun asked, “how are lines in the sand a gift? The winds will cover them as the suns set.”
“Yes, a gift. A track, a path for which you may race upon. Not to reach the end the quickest, but to run as far as you can. So you may reach the furthest oasis, without need to pause at each refuge between here and your goal.”
The Arun began to slow, to gather and listen. “To run farther? To water that is not crowded?”
Próklisi clapped, startling some of the Arun. “Exactly!” he exclaimed, “A contest to challenge yourselves with, those who can run the farthest will be able to drink their fill without needing to wait.”
He set to explaining the challenge, one of his simplest, but one that clearly intrigued the Arun. The race soon began, Arun dashed along the trail, trying to run as far as they could. Soon some Arun learned that going just a step or two slower meant they could go kilometers farther. Others learned to follow in the slipstream of their partners to make the run gentler.
Próklisi ran alongside, cheering on each discovery, each clever maneuver, and the distance the Arun could run continued to beyond the horizon. Even those who had grown tired and rested in nearby shade, watched and squawked out encouragement. This was everything competition was meant to be.
Then she appeared. She arrived in a flash, her form shrouded in a storm gray cloak. Her hair moved wildly in the wind of the Arun’s passing, she ran beside the slowest racers, speaking softly. Próklisi heard her voice on the winds before he realized she had arrived, catching only fragments of what she said. “… why settle for second?”
“…they’re laughing at you.”
“…You can’t do better, but you can make them do worse…”
“…they’ll take what is yours.”
The mood shifted. The Arun in the back started attacking each other, some jumping on the back of others, pushing both into a crash of feathers and talons. Others tripping or ramming into their neighbors to push them behind. The commotion caught the attention of those in the lead, and they began to speed up, fear pushing them forward… draining their stamina.
Próklisi stood in the track, shouting, his voice ringing with authority and pleading. “Stop! This is not the contest! The challenge is for yourself, not against your brethren!” Then he saw her, the only form similar to his on this world. She turned to him, and he recognized those eyes. The lightning may have been replaced with flesh, but that was definitely Mira. He eyes were the same, her life thread identical. How was this possible?
Próklisi charged straight at her, catching her wrist as the race continued to dissolve into balls of flying feather. She turned, and the sky itself seemed to pause. Up close she was startlingly mortal, storm-colored eyes, a small, sad smile. “You wanted them to be the best they can,” she said gently. “Now they make sure none can be better.” She leaned in and kissed his cheek, light as rain, warm as summer thunder. The contact sent a jolt through him, not of pain, but of certainty. Using his pause, Mira vanished, leaving Aerithar entirely. Próklisi looked, but her thread was gone from the world, it was as if her thread had been cleanly plucked from existence itself.
He was about to step into the void to try and track her down, when a squawk of pain brought his attention back to the Arun. “ENOUGH!” he roared, draining all sense of competition from those present. The Arun looked around in confusion, some still writhing in pain. He walked amongst the wounded, wielding his flames to seal what wounds he could. When he finished he was surprised to find that none had died… this time.
One of the Arun approached him cautiously, hopping to avoid pressure on an injured leg. “What was that? Why did we turn on each other?” it asked.
Próklisi looked at the flightless bird, frowning at it’s injury. He had no answer. Mira… if that was Mira… could not be here, could she? The Arun waited patiently for his response, any response. Próklisi looked down, ashamed. “A mystery that I must face myself. One that must be answered before others get hurt.”
He returned to Temporal Limbo, carrying with him every wound the Arun had received in his heart. The gentle fire of competition flickering with something colder. Vengeance. He had wanted them to grow. Instead, he watched their joy curdle into pain.
On Aerithar, the Arun began preening, cleaning each other and checking their wounds. They cleared out the feathers that had been torn away, but a few of them had paused. They stood around a single storm-colored feather, one that had not fallen from any Arun. It sat on the sands, slowly dissolving into starlight.
Act 3: Playing with Chaos
After Aerithar Próklisi drifted through the fringe of Limbo, crimson cloak trailing behind him like molten sunlight. Twice now his competition had been turned to conflict. Twice now he had been beaten. He needed a distraction. Not a mortal challenge this time. Not another world to push toward greatness.
He needed something that would test himself. He needed chaos he could try to shape. So he would be prepared the next time she appeared…
He found that challenge in the child-like pillar Eriselpis. He found her on a shattered moon orbiting a world of ice. The moon’s surface was a fractured mosaic of glass and crystal, remnants of some ancient cataclysm. Eriselpis danced across the broken landscape like a flame dancing between leaves. Her hair was a riot of nebulae and tangles, her body flickering between harmony and beautiful discord. She laughed as she spun, arms wide, sending ripples of wild energy outward.
Everywhere she stepped, chaos bloomed. A crater filled with liquid starlight suddenly exploded into a fountain of singing colors. A field of crystalline flowers burst into flame, then bloomed again as glass butterflies. The very gravity of the moon stuttered… one moment pulling downward, the next flipping sideways so Eriselpis could cartwheel through the air.
Próklisi landed lightly on a jagged outcrop, arms crossed, sunburst mask gleaming. “You’re making a mess again,” he called, voice ringing like struck bronze.
Eriselpis spun mid-air, eyes bright with delight. “Golden brother!” she sang. “Come play! Everything is better when it breaks a little!” She flicked her wrist. A nearby mountain of glass shattered into a thousand floating shards, each one reflecting a different possible future… no, showing windows into this strand’s different presents.
Próklisi stepped forward, golden light flaring around him. “No,” he said as gently as he could, though it still sounded a bit too stern to Eriselpis. “Not this time. I’m not here to watch you break things. I’m here to see if I can guide the breaking.”
Eriselpis tilted her head, curious. “Guide chaos?” she asked, genuinely puzzled. “That sounds… boring.”
“It sounds like a challenge,” he replied, a spark of his old fire returning. “For me. Not for mortals. Let’s see if I can turn your storms into something better.”
Eriselpis grinned, wild and delighted. “Okay!” she said. “Try!” She clapped her hands. The moon answered. Gravity inverted completely. The floating glass shards became a deadly hailstorm, slicing through the thin atmosphere. Cracks raced across the surface, releasing plumes of glowing gas that ignited into auroras of pure madness.
Próklisi moved. He raised both hands and wove rings of solid wind… golden hurricane loops that caught the glass shards mid-flight. Instead of letting them destroy, he redirected them, forcing the shards to orbit in perfect, controlled spirals. Where they passed, they carved beautiful, deliberate patterns into the moon’s surface… not random destruction, but art born from chaos.
Eriselpis laughed with pure joy. “You’re cheating!” she cried joyfully. “You’re making it pretty!”
“That’s the point,” Próklisi answered, voice steady even as he worked. “Destruction is easy. Turning destruction into something greater, that’s hard.”
He pushed harder. The glowing gas plumes were caught in his golden rings and reshaped into towering, luminous spires that stood defiant against the inverted gravity. Where Eriselpis’s chaos had threatened to tear the moon apart, Próklisi forced it to rebuild. stronger, more intricate, more beautiful.
For the first time in a long while, he felt the pure thrill of a challenge aimed at himself. Eriselpis watched him, eyes sparkling. “You’re good at this,” she admitted, drifting closer. “Most people just run away from my storms. You try to dance inside them.”
Próklisi allowed himself a small, satisfied smile behind the mask. “I’m learning,” he said. They spent what might have been days, weeks, maybe even years… together on the broken moon. Eriselpis would unleash waves of beautiful chaos, and Próklisi would follow, trying to guide, redirect, and transform the destruction into creation.
Sometimes he succeeded brilliantly. Sometimes the chaos slipped through his fingers and left glittering wreckage behind. Each failure taught him something new. Each success felt like victory. But slowly, Eriselpis began to pull back. One day, as they rested on a newly formed crystal plateau, she looked at him with unusual seriousness. “I like having you here,” she said softly. “You make the chaos feel… purposeful. I have learned much here, but I need to learn to grow by myself. If my brothers are always cleaning up after me, I’ll never get better at making beautiful storms on my own. I want to share this with the mortals, without them being afraid.”
Próklisi was quiet for a long moment. Then he nodded. “I understand.”
Eriselpis smiled… small, genuine, almost shy. She floated closer, rose onto her toes, and kissed his cheek… light as summer thunder, warm as hope. The kiss tingled against his golden skin like a question he wasn’t ready to answer. “Thank you for playing with me,” she whispered. Then she stepped back, hair swirling with nebulae and lightning. “See you around, golden brother.”
She vanished in a burst of chaotic light, leaving only sparkling afterimages and the faint sound of laughter. Próklisi stood alone on the crystal plateau, touching the place where her lips had brushed his cheek. The kiss felt strangely familiar. It reminded him of his duty. It reminded him of the challenge that still waited. He turned toward the weave. A new tug pulled at him, sharp, insistent, calling him to a world of stone and silence. Zorath. Próklisi’s crimson cloak flared as he stepped forward. The distraction had been good. But the real challenge still lay ahead.
Próklisi stepped onto Zorath. Its surface was a fractured expanse of stone, broken by those few trees able to find purchase in the cracks. Nearby geothermal vents hissed sulfur into the air, as if responding to his sudden arrival. The Zorathim lived here… frail, chitinous beings no taller than a child’s waist, their exoskeletons pale and brittle, their many limbs delicate. They moved slowly, carefully, as though the world itself might shatter them if they dared move too quickly.
They had always been weak. They had always accepted it. Until the golden stranger arrived. Próklisi stepped onto the largest plateau of the Broken Spine, his crimson cloak rippling in the hot wind. His sunburst mask gleamed brighter than the vents below. The Zorathim gathered in a wide circle, their faceted eyes clicking with wary curiosity. A single word pulsed like a wave through their clicking, “Outsider.”
Próklisi raised both hands, palms open. “I am Próklisi,” he said, voice ringing like a bell being struck. “I am Challenge. I have come to offer you strength.”
The Zorathim shifted uneasily. Their limbs trembled. “Strength?” one chittered and clicked, “We are fragile, we break easily.”
Próklisi smiled behind his mask. “Then learn not to break yourself, but to break what threatens to break you.” He gestured to a boulder the size of a small house. With a single motion, he lifted it, not with his hands, but with raw presence, and set it gently before them. “Lift,” he said. “Break. Build. Compete. Discover what you can become when you refuse to remain weak.”
The Zorathim hesitated… then one stepped forward. Its tiny limbs strained. Its carapace creaked. But slowly, impossibly, the boulder rose a few inches from the ground before crashing back down. A ripple of awe spread through the colony. Próklisi laughed, bright, encouraging, impossible to resist. “Again,” he said. “Harder. Together.”
The challenge took root. For weeks the plateau rang with effort. The Zorathim lifted stones, pushed boulders, learned to work in unison. Their frail bodies grew stronger through sheer will. They began carving the stone, learning the difference between granite, basalt and marble. They began shaping crude tools, then better ones. They built small towers, then larger ones.
Competition was gentle at first… who could lift the heaviest rock, who could stack the tallest pile. It was everything competition was meant to be. Then she appeared. But this time Próklisi was ready. She drifted down from the sulfurous wind like a shadow given form, a simple storm-gray cloak, bare feet, hair moving like living lightning. Her eyes were the color of thunderheads before rain.
She moved among the Zorathim, speaking softly. This time Próklisi chose to ignore her, but to listen to what she said so he could build upon her words to maintain the peace and the competition. “…why settle for lifting what you can already move?” she whispered. “Look inside the stone. There is iron there. Iron that can be shaped. Iron that can cut.”
The Zorathim paused. Their faceted eyes clicked. One of them struck the boulder harder than before. It cracked open, revealing a vein of dark ore. Mira smiled… small, sad, knowing. “See?” she said. “Strength is not just lifting. Strength is taking.” Weapons were made. Crude at first, sharp flakes of obsidian bound to chitin hafts. Then better ones. Then spears. Then blades.
Próklisi saw the shift and moved to counter it. He gathered the Zorathim and showed them how to work the metal properly. How to build forges that used the geothermal vents, how to shape iron into beams and supports. He challenged them to build greater and larger structures, towers that scraped the sulfurous sky, bridges that spanned chasms.
“Build,” he urged. “Let your strength serve creation, not destruction.” For a time, it worked. Towers rose. Bridges spanned. The Zorathim sang with pride as they worked.
But Mira moved among them again, whispering. “…why build for others when you can build to protect what is yours?”“…why share when you can claim?”“…who is truly stronger — the one who builds, or the one who breaks?”
The towers became fortresses. The bridges became choke points. The tools of creation became weapons of war. The Zorathim turned on one another. Small skirmishes at first — disputes over ore veins, over building sites. Then larger ones. Then battles.
Próklisi tried to stop it. He raised both hands and forced the iron tools to melt back into slag, but the Zorathim had already learned. They fought with claws and teeth and broken stone when metal failed them. The plateau ran red. At the climax of the largest battle, Dara stood at the center, watching calmly.
Próklisi approached her from behind. Not to surprise her, but to talk. She heard him approach, and spun, ready to counter his assault, surprised when none came.
“Again you have appeared, and again you have twisted my competition into conflict. How you have lived this long is beyond me, how you travel between the strands equally so. but you are already a worthy rival, you need not immortality for that recognition, for you are a rival worthy of me.”
Mira paused. This was clearly not what she was expecting. She approached him cautiously, raising a hand to gently brush his cheek as she spoke, “Then why not grant me immortality, so we may be rivals until the Humans remem…” her voice is cut short. Her eyes go wide, and blood drips from her lips.
Próklisi catches her as she collapses. A stray spear, crude, but lethal, had moved unseen by either and struck her from behind, through her heart. She gasped… a small, mortal sound. Blood, dark and warm, spilled across her storm-gray cloak. Próklisi lowers her gently to the ground. Her storm-colored eyes looked up at him, strangely peaceful. “You wanted them to care who was strongest,” she whispered. “Now they do.” She smiled… small, sad, knowing. “But they are not who you should be concerned…” Her breathing was ragged, uneven, as she tried to speak. “…with. Beware… Humans… final trial…” Then her life-thread faded from the strand as cleanly as a cut string. She was gone, her body but an empty shell. Próklisi remained kneeling, golden hands stained with mortal blood.
Around him, the Zorathim continued fighting. No longer for pride, but for survival, for dominance, for the right to be the last one standing. He stood slowly. The crimson light in his cloak dimmed. He looked at the battlefield… once a place of hopeful effort, of creation, now a wasteland of ash and iron. The sky was choked with smoke from the great furnaces that never stopped burning.
He turned away. The challenge had been answered. Not with growth, but with blood. And somewhere in the void, a question remained. Could anyone ask “Can you do better?” without someone eventually answering with war. Próklisi stepped back into the weave, carrying Zorath’s endless war in his heart. The gentle fire of competition had flickered once more with something colder.
Act 4: Learning from the Elders.
Temporal Limbo was not a place of silence. It was a place where sound had simply given up trying to matter. A vast, mirror-flat lake stretched in every direction, its surface perfectly still … frozen not by cold, but by the complete absence of time. No ripple disturbed it. No wind touched it. Even light seemed hesitant to move across its surface, as though afraid of breaking some ancient agreement.
Próklisi appeared at the edge of that lake, crimson cloak hanging motionless around him despite the faint cosmic currents that usually stirred even here. His sunburst mask reflected nothing; the void behind it was deeper than the lake itself. He sat on a stone outcropping close to the lake’s shore. He had come here to think.
Mira.
The name refused to leave him. He had seen her face in three separate strands now — not echoes, not doppelgangers, but the same face, the same eyes, the same mind, the same mortal fragility worn by different species across different ages. Once as a bolt of lightning, searing her face into his memory. A second time, cloaked in storms but solid flesh underneath, staying for only a few moments. And then again on Zorath, where he held her as her life faded, the name of some unknown species on her lips alongside a warning.
Mortals did not do that. Mortals simply ended.
So what was she? Próklisi crouched, golden fingers trailing just above the lake’s surface. The water did not react. It could not. Only the Pilars moved in Timelessness.
He spoke aloud, voice ringing like struck bronze across the stillness. “Chronos, brother I have questions when you are free.”
The air itself seemed to hesitate. Then the ticking came. Chronos materialized a short distance away, his form a shifting mosaic of brass gears and living starlight. The polished void of his face reflected every possible future at once… some bright, some crumbling, some already ash.
“You called,” Chronos said, voice a precise chime. ”Be quick Challenger, I have my own challenges that must be dealt with.”
Próklisi rose to his full height. “A mortal woman. She appears across strands… not as echo, but the same mind. The same soul, the same face. She has appeared across ages on different worlds. She has died in my presence, yet I feel I will see her again. Is this type of mortal under your domain?”
Chronos’s gears turned once, methodically. “Travelers between strands are rare,” he answered. “So long as they do not disrupt the flow of time, they are not my concern. The other Pillars may deal with them as their domains allow.”
Then Próklisi remembered Mira’s final warning, “What of a species called Humans? Or maybe a world? What do you know of them?”
Chronos looked at Próklisi with interest. He shrugged, and looked through the strands, every individual timeline. His void-face flickering with countless branching possibilities. For a moment a pale white face seemed to appear over the void, then it faded. Chronos, normally composed, turned to Próklisi in surprise. “I find no Strand, no species, not even a mention of ‘Humans’, neither now, passed, nor yet to be. I can feel an unease with the term, where did you come across it?”
“A warning, from the mortal I mentioned.” Próklisi answered.
“Then perhaps this is connected to my own challenge. I will look into this.” Chronos turned as if to leave, but paused before stepping away. “Be quick when speaking with Thanatos,” Chronos added, “You both have duties to tend to.”
Then he was gone… gears dissolving into starlight, leaving only the faintest ticking behind. Próklisi stood alone again, with new questions unanswered. But it seemed those were Chronos’s challenge, not his own. He waited a moment longer, then spoke once more to the void. “Thanatos, I require your experience and wisdom for a challenge I face, will you speak with me?”
Thanatos arrived promptly. He did not come alone.
The Pillar of Death stepped out of a ripple in the air, a chill ran up Próklisi’s spine as he approached. At his side walked another figure… a sentient bundle of winds given form, wrapped in a dark cloak of roiling storm clouds that constantly shifted and reformed, obscuring any clear features. Próklisi could see the being’s life thread had already been severed, but it was not a simple soul… it continued to exist, drawing it’s new thread from Thanatos himself.
Thanatos raised a hand. “A moment,” he said, voice the hush of settling earth. “I must speak with my newest reaper before we speak.”
Próklisi nodded silently and stepped back, trying to take in the scene. Something had changed, not just with Thanatos, but here… now. Then he heard it, water lapping against a shore. Próklisi turned, and saw that the lake was no longer frozen in time. It rippled gently, small waves splashing against the grey stone of timeless limbo. Próklisi looked out and could see there was a faint glow, a bubble of time that had arrived when Thanatos and his ‘Grim Reaper’ had.
He looked at Thanatos with new eyes. The Pillar of Death was different than he remembered. No longer was he merely smoke and ash. He now wore a charcoal cloak lined with steady white flames that burned without consuming. The porcelain skull mask sat upon his face with quiet authority. He moved with greater certainty, greater weight… a being who had accepted a heavier burden and found strength in it.
Thanatos finished speaking to the Grim Reaper. It bowed, a swirl of dark clouds, and stepped sideways, vanishing through a tear that briefly pulled in more active time before sealing again. As the reaper left, the small bubble of active time expanded momentarily. The once time frozen lake rippled again, as if finding joy in the simple motion allowed.
Thanatos turned to Próklisi. “You wished to speak?”
Próklisi studied him a moment longer, then asked the question that had been burning in him. “Can mortals live multiple lives across different strands? I have seen one mortal appear in three separate strands… the same face, the same essence, claiming to seek immortality.”
Thanatos was quiet for a long time. “I have not personally encountered such a being,” he said at last. “But some mortal cultures speak of ‘reincarnation’… souls returning in new bodies. This may be a version of that, or perhaps the origin of the concept itself. If a mortal truly attains immortality, it would fall to me to correct the imbalance. You should inform me immediately if your mortal shows signs of immortality.”
Próklisi nodded. His gaze drifted to the place where the Grim Reaper had stood. “What of that one?” he asked. “The being you brought with you. It seemed… immortal. Made by your hand no less.”
Thanatos’s mask tilted slightly… almost approving. “Kanna’s recent decree allows me to create assistants,” he explained. “Grim Reapers. Their original life-threads must be cut and ended before they can enter my service. They are bound to me and my duties until released to their final rest. I prefer to call them ‘un-mortal.’ Their new existence cannot be ended prematurely, but it is still limited. That is likely why the reaper brought a bubble of active time with it from Lyris… a residual effect of a mortal mind entering timeless Limbo.”
Próklisi thought for a moment, remembering his first meeting with Mira and her request. “So it is possible for one of us to grant a form of immortality… but how would a mortal know of this?”
Thanatos looked closely at Próklisi, the flames in his eyes mirroring the flames upon Próklisi’s head. “They shouldn’t have such knowledge. We do not interact with the mortals consistently enough. Even so, they would likely be bound to the Pillar who granted it to them, and there would be clear signs. If not, there would be imbalance.”
Próklisi was about to ask another question when he felt a sudden, sharp tug from the void… someone, somewhere, was building a challenge specifically crafted for him. He straightened. “Thank you for answering my questions,” he said. “But a new challenger awaits. I must go.”
Thanatos inclined his head. “Such respites are welcome,” he replied. “Especially if they are to help my younger siblings.”
The two Pillars turned in different directions. Thanatos stepped toward a strand heavy with fresh death. Próklisi stepped toward whatever awaited him… crimson cloak flaring as he vanished into the weave.
As the last echoes of their presence faded, something small stirred behind the stone outcropping near the lake’s edge. A single, colorful ball of fur rolled slowly into view… vibrant reds, and greens intertwined across its tiny body.
It moved with hesitant curiosity, as though tasting the air where the Pillars had stood. It stopped at the exact spot where Thanatos and Próklisi had spoken. For a moment it simply rested. Then the remnants of active time, the faint ripples that had briefly disturbed the lake, began to drift toward it like smoke drawn to a flame. The colorful ball of fur absorbed them greedily, the glowing bubble of time shrinking until vanishing into its fluffy body.
It remembered. It knew its purpose.
It had not known its purpose could be found at home.
A soft, happy chirp escaped the little creature. Nearby, a thin crack in reality shimmered into existence, a jagged tear no wider than a handspan, leaking faint starlight and the scent of distant mushrooms.
The ball of fur rolled toward it with unmistakable joy, bouncing once, twice, then disappearing happily through the rift. The crack sealed behind it with a soft sigh. The lake of Temporal Limbo returned to perfect stillness.
Act 5 – The Face of Mira
Próklisi followed the pull of the challenge. Somebody was calling him, not by name but through action. This was new, unexpected. He was the one who created challenges, others did not make challenges for him. The meeting with Thanatos was still fresh in his mind, as was his brother’s creation… no, his transiteration, the grim reaper. Próklisi wondered if he had accidentally given a mortal some of his power, as Thanatos had done intentionally. The idea wasn’t impossible, though he couldn’t think of when it may have happened.
He decided that, in this case, caution may be appropriate. See who the challenger was, find out what they wanted, and deal with them as needed. When he stepped into the strand he chose to appear in orbit around the planet. This was Aelthir, a small ringed water-world. From here it looked like nearly the whole planet was ocean. The truth was that much of the world’s land mass was a scant few feet under the waves, and would be uncovered during low tide. If low tide was a constant the world would be closer to evenly split between ocean and land.
This world belonged to the Virelai, a species of crustaceans that could handle being both in water and upon the sandy beaches of their world. Their bioluminescent shells sparkled and shifted as though they mirrored the constellations in the sky. Próklisi could feel that the Virelai were facing an existential challenge, and were struggling to fight back. He had never been called to an existential challenge before, those were still under Kanna’s domain, and often meant the natural end of a strand.
But Próklisi was not his brothers. Chronos would see when the strand was meant to end. Thanatos would feel if the strand was meant to live or die. Even his sister Nyxial would have some inkling to the world’s survival. But he was Próklisi, he was challenge and competition, meant to push mortals to evolve beyond their limitations. And the Virelai were certainly being pushed… evolve, or die. That was the challenge they were facing.
They were fighting the challenge, they had not created it. Though, Próklisi thought, their willingness to fight for survival may have helped the challenge’s call reach him. Próklisi dropped beneath the waves to get a closer look at what the Virelai were working on, and working against.
As soon as the oceans waves closed over him, Próklisi knew there was something unnatural in the water. Small ripples of blackness floated by occasionally, not wider nor longer than a blade of grass. He reached out to touch one, and it burned away as he neared, the ocean screaming in response. He continued down, and saw many Virelai, some swimming slowly, others being carried by their brethren, towards a pearlescent building held together by seaweed. A hospital, at least from the looks of it.
Próklisi entered the hospital, still unseen to the Virelai. This was not a competition he built for them. It was not his rules they were following. Who was in charge of those rules though, would soon be clear. The halls were filled with sick and dying Virelai, the bioluminescence that caused the constellations on their shells to flicker was dimming. Próklisi could see a hair thin blackness flow where their bioluminescence should glow.
He drifted past sick and dying alike. Each had notes written in Virelai ink stating how long the individual was expected to survive. No treatment plans. Tests to identify, but not to cure. No signs of hope. This wasn’t the heart of the challenge. This was… surrender.
Próklisi carried on through the halls. Somewhere in here there were those willing to face the challenge they were going through. Someone was fighting back. He had gone through three floors now, he could sense the answer he was seeking was near. Then he saw it, a single room. Above the curved entryway was written ‘Recovery’.
Próklisi drifted through the wall, and could see dozens of the hospital staff consulting their notes, taking samples, their antennae waving in wild excitement. Two Virelai lay curled in beds of coral and seaweed, resting. Their bioluminescence was bright. No, not just bright, it was different. It didn’t just show as specks of light dancing about their shells, but it gave a soft glow, looking like a nebula drifting amongst stars.
He drifted up behind what he took to be the lead Virelai medic, reading the note in his clawed hand. Orders from some ranking official it seemed. ‘The Lamentfire cannot be cured. It is the cure. A fifty percent increase in our lifespan cannot be ignored. Find the cause, and be it a strain or our own biology, we will have it spread quicker than when this plague first arrived from above two generations ago.’
Plague… that could only mean Asthéneia.
But why would his sister go through such a convoluted, and apparently time consuming, plan to call for him? If she wanted to talk, why did she not call, as he had when he called their brothers for help? Pieces were still missing to this puzzle, but now he knew the challenger, and had some understanding of the challenge.
Knowing it was Asthéneia who had crafted this for him, well, that at least made it easier to locate his challenger. He felt out through the strand. Pillars were not always aware if another was near, but they could always locate their siblings if they simply focused on the essence of their sibling’s domain. Asthéneia was close, standing on a high shore only a few hundred miles away.
Próklisi was there in moments, rising from the water, steam flowing off his metallic skin as the flames that were his hair blazed in what he hoped was a dramatic fashion. There she was, rot and gangrene standing watch as cold and devious as her domain. He approached, began to raise his arm to accuse her and contest her actions.
His arm didn’t make it above his belt. There was someone else standing on the shore. Another woman. Her eyes, her face… they were unmistakable. “Mira?” he stammered, the word fell flat, as surprised at her presence as he was.
This version of Mira didn’t seem to recognize him, her head tilting in confusion as Asthéneia stepped between them, saying something Próklisi didn’t catch. He was too focused on Mira. Four times now… four. This was no coincidence. “This shouldn’t be,” he muttered. “I watched Mira die on Zorath. I held her as her lifeblood drained. She looked exactly—”
The new Mira laughed, the sound of bells drowning in tar. “I have had many names, golden boy. None of them yours.”
Even the voice was the same. But there was something different… her features were twisted, carved with gangrene and rot down to the bone. Thanatos had said there would be clear signs… Asthéneia had made her un-mortal, had given Mira a part of her own powers. Próklisi turned to face his sister, his anger bursting out from his skull in leaps of flame. “You defile her!” he said accusatorily.
“You dare,” Asthéneia said, voice soft and venomous, “You dare suggest you knew my muse before I made her immortal?”
Próklisi turned the full weight of his gaze on Asthéneia. “This plague ends,” he declared. “I challenge it, and once it is gone I will have the truth.”
Asthéneia bowed, smiling her gangrenous smile, “No my dear brother, when I win and our plague survives on even one strand of Aelthir, you will answer my questions in truth.”
The two set about the rules of the challenge. In one hundred seventeen years Aelthir would pass through a plasma nebula, this was a set temporal event for the world. The radiation and storms of the nebula were scheduled to end all life on Aelthir in that year. Próklisi had until then to cleanse every infected strand of the plague, but Asthéneia could not start new plagues on strands she had not yet touched. She could only work with what had already been started.
The War of Inspiration began. Próklisi had already seen the work the Virelai were doing, he simply needed to speed up the process. He descended into the floating cities and walked among the Virelai as a golden apparition, whispering to them “You can surrender, you can die. Or you can give of yourself so that your children, and theirs after them, can live on.” The Virelai who heard the whispers felt a sudden, impossible surge of pride. Scientists who had already lost limbs to Lamentfire dragged themselves to laboratories. Artists painted equations in their own glowing blood. Children too weak to swim dictating hope and dreams to their parents. The single burning thought Próklisi poured into every mind: We will not die screaming. We will die cured. We will be remembered as the ones who beat rot.
Asthéneia did not dawdle, she had a part to play too if she hoped to win. She flooded the oceans with new strains, light-eaters that turned cure-attempts into blinding agony. Memory-worms that made researchers forget their own names mid-equation. A variant that caused the body to heal into grotesque, painless tumors, life prolonged, but dignity erased. Plagues that made the cure itself cause agony.
For a century the war raged across every timeline of Aelthir. Próklisi’s inspiration against Asthéneia’s corruption. Cities rose and fell in fire and ink. In most timelines the Lamentfire burned bright, oceans of screaming light. But in the central branches, the Virelai began to win. A retrovirus was born: Auroracide. It rewrote Lamentfire into harmless bioluminescence, the pain and damage was removed, but the benefits remained and became constant. The first cured city sang in pure, painless color for the first time in generations. Word spread like dawn. Próklisi appeared before Asthéneia on the highest spire, golden mask radiant.
“I won,” he said simply.
The gangrenous Mira stepped forward, rotting fingers stroking the sunburst mask. “Did you?” she asked sweetly. She kissed the golden cheek. Where her lips touched, gold began to rust. Próklisi recoiled. Asthéneia laughed, she raised one hand. The cure worked perfectly, on every timeline except one.
There was a single branch, a single timeline, that Asthéneia had kept hidden. Some aspect of her domain allowed her to cloak an entire timeline from his view. She had mutated the retrovirus with but a touch there. It did not cure. It perfected the Lamentfire. Every cured Virelai woke unaging, painless, and utterly empty. Glowing shells with no memory, no desire, no soul. They drifted in clean, silent water, beautiful and vacant. A gallery of living statues. Despair deeper than any scream because there was no one left inside to scream. The other timelines died cured and proud, as Próklisi had bidden. But the hidden timeline, that one Asthéneia kept. A private gallery. Próklisi stared at the empty glowing husks, mask dimming for the first time in eternity.
Próklisi felt the hidden timeline bloom into existence and staggered as though struck. “You… kept them,” he whispered. “You kept the worst death of all. You… twisted my victory.”
Asthéneia stepped close, black tears dripping onto his golden cloak, eating holes like acid. She whispered, “Never, speak my muse’s name again. She was never yours to save.” She paused, her voice shifting from venom to curiosity. “But before you slink away, golden one, tell me of these cloaks and masks. Thanatos, Nyx... they wear them now. What do they signify? Do they grant power?”
Próklisi straightened, his arrogance flickering back like a dying ember. “They mark growth. Each Pillar who wears one has faced an internal challenge and emerged transformed. Stronger. I, as the embodiment of challenge, was forged with mine from the beginning.”
Asthéneia disregarded him with a wave of her hand, black droplets scattering like ink. “Then I too have met my challenge. I have twisted victory from your grasp, turned hope into hollow eternity.”
Asthéneia and the fourth Mira left hand in hand, leaving Proklisi alone in the last strand of Aelthir. He pounded his fist into the sand, turning it to glass in an instant. Another defeat, another loss. He had faltered, again.
He roared out in anger “No! The challenge was met! It still had meaning, it… it must… have meaning…”
Act 6: Failure is not defeat.
After Aelthir, after his defeat at Asthéneia’s hand, Próklisi felt the need to prove himself burn hot within him. To show everyone that even when the challenge was guaranteed to fail, it still held meaning. He wandered Temporal Limbo, examining first the strands at the fringes, those being torn apart from within, those damaged by minor paradoxes, doomed to be severed from their cosmos. The answer was not there.
He moved on, walking the edge of the universe now. The Strands here were different, rubbing up against other realities, where the rules and laws Kanna had set bled together with those of his brethren. Some strands still twisted and curled as they ought, some appeared as a single pillar of light, each thread straightened, and others branched out the further he looked from their center. Still he didn’t find what he was looking for.
So he looked toward the center, where the strands still glowed bright and healthy, still followed only Kanna’s will. There he found it. Not one strand, but a collective, each representing the same world, each doomed to an end they could not escape. This is what he needed, these were the strands of Placuit.
The sky above Placuit had never been kind. It was a bruised purple, streaked with ash and lit from below by the constant red glow of the world's many volcanoes. The air tasted of sulfur and molten stone, thick enough to chew. Mountains rose like the spines of sleeping giants, their flanks carved into terraces of black basalt and glittering obsidian. Forges burned day and night in every valley, fed by rivers of lava that the people had learned to tame.
The Genus called this place home, though they would never have used such a soft word. They were not flesh, but living stone, geolythic crystals, each one a towering prism of quartz, feldspar, and rarer minerals that caught the light like trapped stars. Their bodies moved not by muscle but by sheer telekinetic will, sliding across basalt floors or hovering above molten streams. They spoke not with voices, but with thoughts that rippled outward in sharp, economical bursts.
"Work."
"Forge."
"Build."
Those were the only words most ever needed. They had lived this way for uncounted generations. When the volcanoes grew restless, they channeled the heat. When the ground shook, they braced the spires. When the sky rained ash, they gathered it to temper new alloys. They did not fear endings. A life of a thousand years was long enough to recognize the need.
Then the stranger came.
He appeared at dawn on the highest terrace of the Great Caldera Forge, where the master-smiths shaped the largest plates for their cities in the mountains. No gate opened. No ship landed. He simply was… standing on the scorched basalt, molten cloak rippling in the superheated wind, sunburst mask gleaming brighter than the lava below.
The nearest Genus, a seven-meter crystal lattice named Khar, felt the intrusion first. Its facets flashed in alarm.
"Outsider."
"Wrong form."
"Purpose?"
The thought spread instantly, a telepathic ripple that reached every Genus within a hundred kilometers. Hammers paused. Conduits of molten metal stilled. Thousands of crystal minds turned toward the golden figure. Próklisi raised both hands, palms open. His voice rang out, clear, resonant, cutting through the roar of the forges like a struck bell. "I am Próklisi," he said. "I am Challenge. I come not to conquer, but to warn."
Silence. Then a chorus of single words, overlapping, sharp as obsidian shards.
"Warn?"
"Lies."
"Leave."
"Proof."
He lowered his hands. The sunburst mask tilted slightly, as though listening to something only he could hear. "Your star is dying," he said simply. "Its core is collapsing. In less than three cycles of your longest forge-season, it will bloom into fire that consumes everything. This strand… this world, will end."
The Genus did not gasp. They did not cry out. They simply... considered. Khar slid forward, its facets refracting the red light into a thousand angry spears.
"Proof." Khar repeated.
Próklisi extended one hand. A sphere of golden light formed above his palm. Within it, the Genus saw their sun: not the familiar red disc they had always known, but a swollen, pulsing thing, veins of instability threading through its core like cracks in bad steel.
"Observe, this is not prophecy. This is what is already happening." The vision lasted only minutes. When it faded, the terrace was silent save for the low rumble of a distant volcano. Khar's facets dimmed, then flared again—brighter, colder.
"Confirm."
"Assess."
"Termination."
The telepathic wave spread outward—first to the nearest forges, then to the mountain-cities beyond, then across the entire world. A million crystal minds processed the same data at once. And then, collectively, they turned back to the stranger.
"Challenge?"
"Survive?"
"Method?"
Próklisi's mask gleamed. "That is for you to decide. I offer no salvation. I offer only the truth, and the chance to meet it head-on. Confirm the threat yourselves. Heal your star if you can. Escape if you cannot. Make your final acts meaningful." He stepped back, cloak settling around him like lava. "I will watch. I will not interfere. Prove your will, Genus. Or accept the end with dignity."
The silence that followed was not fear. It was calculation. Then Khar spoke for them all.
"Will know."
"Will act."
The first cycle was devoted to confirmation. The Genus had always been methodical. Now they became relentless. They raised new observatories, spire-towers of polished obsidian topped with lenses of perfect quartz, on every major volcano. Teams of crystal minds linked telepathically, forming vast sensor arrays that drank in every photon, every neutrino, every gravitational ripple from their dying sun.
The data was merciless. Core density increasing. Helium flash imminent. Collapse in 2.8 forge-seasons. No ambiguity. No hope of error. They did not mourn, they did not panic, they simply adjusted the equation.
Cycle two: stabilization.
They had tamed volcanoes for millennia. Now they turned that knowledge upward. Massive psionic amplifiers rose from the calderas, crystalline horns taller than mountains, channeling the collective will of thousands. They reached for the star, seeking to inject stability into its core.
The first attempt failed within hours. The sun's magnetic field rejected the intrusion, spitting back a coronal mass ejection that scorched half a continent. Seven million Genus minds went dark. They did not curse fate. They recalibrated.
Second attempt: deeper resonance. They tuned the amplifiers to match the star's own frequency. For three days the sky burned white. Then the sun shuddered, and stabilized for almost an hour. When the hour was up it flared again, worse than before. The Genus learned. Failure simply meant more data.
Cycle three: Survive. They understood now that healing was impossible. The star was too far gone. They turned their attempts to protecting their world. A plan was devised, a great barrier would be raised, powered by thermal vents, by technology, and by the psychic force of every remaining Genus. They only had 1.6 forge seasons remaining…
Próklisi watched the progress on each of Placuit’s strands from Temporal Limbo. The Genus had accepted the challenge that had been given, and they worked tirelessly. Even those who had become so ancient their sharp crystalline edges had become dull and smooth worked with renewed vigor. They had purpose. Then he felt a chill in the air of Temporal Limbo. Thanatos had arrived.
He appeared beside Próklisi without sound or light. Simply there, his now ashen cloak stirring in a wind that never blew, porcelain skull mask reflecting the dying suns of Placuit’s many strands. His presence was a quiet weight, like the moment before a grave is filled.
"Do you intend to change the outcome?" he asked, voice the hush of earth settling. “Their end is a set temporal event. I will collect the souls I am called to collect.”
Próklisi did not turn. "No. It is not my intent to change what must happen. Only to give them purpose before they are gone. One final challenge. One worthy farewell."
Thanatos considered this before responding, “This is mercy then?”
Próklisi bowed his head. “It is the best I can give them.”
The flames of Thanatos’ eyes dimmed to gentle embers, a smile slowly etching itself across his mask. He placed one bony hand upon Próklisi’s shoulder as he settled in at his side. "Then we watch, and we honor."
Back on Placuit, with only half a forge season remaining, the barrier was nearly complete. Thermal convectors were connected, psionic amplifiers were ready to thrum to life. Only a few more pieces to be set in place before it could be powered. Then disaster happened. The sun gave its first true warning flare, a blinding pulse that lit the night side of Placuit like a second dawn. The wave was too strong for the unfinished, and unpowered barrier. It deflected most of the blast, but shattered in the process. Three fourths of the barrier destroyed in an instant. It had proven that it would have worked, but there was not enough time to fix the damage, to replace what was lost.
The sky above Placuit had turned the color of fresh blood. The sun, no longer a steady red disc but a swollen, pulsing wound, filled half the horizon. Its surface boiled with arching flares that reached farther than the orbit of the outermost moon. The ground never stopped trembling. Cracks raced across basalt terraces like lightning frozen in stone. Rivers of lava, once obedient channels, now overflowed their banks and clawed upward toward the forges. The Genus did not flee in panic. They had no word for panic. They worked.
Final Cycle: escape. The Genus had not made only the plan to build the barrier. Some had chosen instead to focus on escape, to leave their homeworld behind and find another world to live upon. They turned to the planet itself. Basalt, onyx, even obsidian, each was plentiful, black glass born of volcanic fury. They carved it into hulls, shaping vast ships the size of small mountains. Inside, they built chambers of pure crystal where Genus minds could anchor, protected from vacuum and radiation. Propulsion came from geothermal taps linked to psionic amplifiers, raw force of will pushing against the void.
But there was not enough time to train, to prepare. So they built cybernetics. They drilled circuitry into their own crystal forms, so they could amplify their psionics and control their last hope with their minds. Hundreds rose, dark spheres lifting from the calderas, trailing smoke and molten slag. Inside, Genus minds linked in vast choruses, sharing memory, knowledge, purpose.
As the first ship broke the atmosphere, minds called out. Reaching, seeking, trying to find the one who had warned them, had given them a chance at survival.
"Thanks given."
"Chance offered."
"Gratitude."
Not all minds agreed. From other minds came different words.
"Too late."
"Not enough."
"Betrayed."
Próklisi did not answer, he could not hear them from Limbo. He only inclined his head. The sun began its final expansion. Placuit trembled. The Genus minds inside the ships sang, a single, wordless telepathic hymn of defiance and acceptance. The corona bloomed. The shockwave hit. Obsidian hulls glowed white, then red, then black. Ships crumpled like foil. Minds winked out one by one.
Thanatos stepped forward. Most souls rose willingly into the weave, they did not need his help. A few resisted, briefly, before his scythe cut them free, joining the current. The strand died. Placuit vanished into ash and memory.
Próklisi stood motionless, cloak still rippling in a wind that no longer existed. Thanatos lowered his scythe. The white fire along his cloak dimmed to mere wafts of smoke.
"They fought," Próklisi said quietly.
"They died with purpose. You gave them that" Thanatos regarded the fading light below. "And so the weave turns."
Neither moved for a long time. Then Próklisi spoke again, almost to himself. "I gave them truth. I gave them challenge. I gave them a final act worth remembering."
Thanatos inclined his skull mask. "You did. And they answered."
The two Pillars watched as the last embers cooled. “Then why does it feel like it wasn’t enough?”
Thanatos smiled gently. “It never does, brother. But mercy, mercy always means more than enough.”
Neither Pillar noticed the few charred obsidian hulks that survived. Not the largest ships but the smallest, mere blackened rocks drifting through the void, silent and cold. Neither heard the final telepathic whispers from single minds, each the lone survivor in their damaged craft…
"Many Ends.”
“Survivors.”
“We are.”
“Saepe Exitus."
The whisper drifted outward, carried on waves of radiation and dust, into the dark between stars. And the cosmos turned once more.
Act 7 – The Trap That Failed
Asthéneia was stone. Well, she was gray and unmoving as stone. Frozen now in timelessness. Her statue stood frozen in the Limbo, mask weeping black tears that never fell.
Próklisi visited only once.
He stood before her for a long moment, sunlight dimmed to a candle. “I wanted to challenge you again,” he said quietly. “Not to defeat you. To understand why you made her yours.” The statue did not answer. He left without touching the crack on her shoulder. The woman who wore Mira’s face was gone, she had not been seen in over an age.
Her thread had vanished from every strand he could see. But the rot she left behind still spread. Contests turning sour, rivalries hardening into vendettas, gentle fires flaring into something that wanted to burn the house down. He could not fight stone. He could fight the shadow of that stone that still walked free.
The PleaPróklisi went to Kanna.He found Him barefoot on the edge of the Limbo, watching the unborn blue-green strand turn slowly in its cradle of dark.The Eighth Pillar knelt, sunlight dimmed to a candle.“I need six living strands linked as one arena,” he said.“A single grand contest across six species.Not for glory.To catch her.To stop the poison before it spreads further.”Kanna’s gaze was sorrowful, ancient, unreadable.“I know who she is,” He said quietly.“I know what she has become.And I know what you still sleeps inside the name you will not speak.”Próklisi waited.Kanna continued, voice soft as falling ash:“The damage is real.The weave has already frayed.But the Plan can bend once more—if the lesson is worth the cost.”He placed a hand on Próklisi’s bowed head.“Six strands.Six species.One contest.One chance.”The permission was granted.The Six Worlds
Ignis-Vorax – living flame-whales, the Pyrovanti
Glaciera – crystalline spider-mathematicians, the Kryonids
Aerithar – jellyfish-cities, the Nimbulari
Terravox – singing stone titans, the Lithoroi
Chronoveld – clockwork scarabs, the Horomids
Nebula-Sanguis – vampiric star-beings, the Haemovora
Six portals opened in the Limbo, braided together by threads of golden light.Próklisi stood at the center, arms wide.“The question is simple,” he announced to all six skies at once.“Build the most beautiful, useful, lasting thing your species can imagine.Share it with the others.Teach and be taught.In thirty cycles, we celebrate together.”The response was a chorus of wonder.Flame-whales began forging solar harps.Ice-spiders wove equations that cooled stars.Jellyfish-cities painted living murals across nebulae.Stone titans raised harmonic bridges between planets.Clockwork scarabs built time-gardens where yesterday bloomed beside tomorrow.Star-beings bled light into shared constellations.For twenty-nine cycles it was the most perfect contest ever conceived.Thanatos, Chronos, Nyx, and Epignos watched from the Limbo’s rim, cloaks stirring with cautious hope.Epignos spoke first, voice like turning pages:“She is already here.”The ChasePróklisi felt her before he saw her: ozone and rust.She stood on the harmonic bridge between Terravox and Glaciera, barefoot, wearing Dara’s face on a body of living corrosion.No cloak this time.No mask.Only storm-gray eyes filmed with sorrow and certainty.“You came,” she said.“I came to understand,” he answered.She smiled—the same sad smile from Chronoveld—and stepped backward off the bridge.Próklisi followed.Through Ignis-Vorax’s solar forges (she whispered, and flame-whales began hoarding their harps).Through Glaciera’s theorem-webs (she whispered, and spiders guarded their equations with venomous ice).Through Aerithar’s painted skies (she whispered, and jellyfish began painting over each other’s work with acid ink).Through Terravox’s bridges (she whispered, and stone titans raised fists instead of songs).Through Chronoveld’s gardens (she whispered, and scarabs set traps in yesterday).Through Nebula-Sanguis (she whispered, and stars began drinking each other’s blood).Próklisi chased.He was sunlight cutting through smoke, trying to catch moonlight.Every time he almost reached her, she slipped sideways into another world, leaving only the echo of her voice:“See what competition truly births.”He did not look around.He did not see the bridges cracking, the harps melting into weapons, the gardens erasing themselves, the stars going dark.He only saw her.The WarWhen he finally cornered her on the cold outer shell of Nebula-Sanguis, thirty cycles had passed.Six worlds burned behind them.Flame-whales rammed ice cities into dust.Clockwork scarabs rewrote history so entire species never existed.Stone titans toppled their own bridges to deny passage.Star-beings drank until only black holes yawned where galaxies once shone.The contest had become war.She stood among the dying lights, hands open, rust falling from her fingers like black snow.“This is what happens,” she said gently.“This is Kanna’s will.Every race ends in conquest.Every wager ends in blood.Accept it.”Her voice was almost kind.Próklisi looked—truly looked—for the first time.He saw the six strands bleeding into one another, portals now wounds, species that had begun with wonder now annihilating one another with the tools he had taught them to build.His sunlight guttered.“No,” he whispered.Then louder, to the burning skies:“NO.”He turned to her, eyes blazing with grief, not anger.“I will not accept this fate.If gentle fire can be twisted this far, then the flaw is deeper than you.I will challenge the one who wove the flaw.”She tilted her head, almost proud.“At last,” she said.And for one heartbeat the rust fell away entirely and he saw Dara—real, terrified, pleading—before the rot surged back and she vanished into the dark between dying stars.Próklisi stood alone among the ruins of his greatest contest.Six worlds at war.Six lessons turned to ash.And in the silence between heartbeats he understood:The question was never hers to answer.It was his.He turned toward the Limbo, sunlight no longer warm, only resolute.Kanna was waiting.The final contest was about to begin.
The six strands burned behind him like six dying suns.Próklisi walked the Limbo alone, sunlight dimmed to a single, steady flame.He found Kanna exactly where he had left Him: barefoot at the edge of everything, watching the unborn blue-green world turn in its cradle of night.The Eighth Pillar did not kneel.He stood, golden cloak torn and soot-streaked, voice calm but carrying the weight of six ruined civilizations.“I have a question,” he said.Kanna turned.His eyes were sorrow without end.“Speak.”Próklisi opened his hands. In them shimmered fragments of the sixfold contest: a shard of flame-whale harp, a frozen Kryonid equation, a scrap of Nimbulari sky-painting, a cracked Lithoroi chord, a broken Horomid gear, a drop of Haemovora star-blood.All of them beautiful once.All of them weapons now.“This was meant to be a dance,” he said.“Rivalry and cooperation, hand in hand.Growth through joy.Learning through trying again.I lit gentle fires so souls could warm themselves and reach higher.Instead, every contest ends in blood.Every race becomes conquest.Every wager becomes genocide.”He let the fragments fall.They hung in the air between them, glowing, accusing.“I have chased the shadow that poisons my gift for centuries.I have blamed her.But the shadow only uses what is already there.The flaw is deeper.It is in the weave itself.”He stepped forward.“I challenge You, not with pride, but with grief.Rewrite the weave.Make competition safe again.Let ‘Can you do better?’ never again mean ‘at any cost.’Let the gentle fire stay gentle.Or tell me why You will not.”Silence.Then Kanna spoke, voice soft as the first falling leaf of autumn.“You were there when the first galactic war began.”Images unfolded in the Limbo like memories neither of them had ever forgotten.A younger Próklisi, bright and laughing, lighting contests across a thousand worlds at once.Races that spanned nebulae.Duels of art that birthed galaxies.Wagers that sculpted time.And slowly, inevitably, the laughter turning to shouting.The art turning to weapons.The wagers turning to extinction.“I weighed glory above hearts,” the younger Próklisi had said, delighted, when two species annihilated each other over who had built the brighter star.“I gave them the question,” he had boasted, as civilizations rose and fell in flames to answer it.The memory faded.Kanna’s gaze never left Próklisi’s.“You were never innocent,” He said.“You were the spark.I merely let the fire run its course.The weave is not broken.It is honest.Competition and war are the same root, different seasons.To remove one is to remove both.To remove both is to remove growth.”Próklisi closed his eyes.He saw Aerithar’s sky black with poison ink.He saw Chronoveld’s dunes littered with broken gears.He saw six worlds tearing each other apart with the very gifts he had taught them to share.“Then the price is too high,” he whispered.He opened his eyes.“I will pay it anyway.Bind me.Silence me.But do not ask me to accept this.”Kanna’s sorrow deepened until the Limbo itself seemed to bow beneath it.“So be it.”He raised one hand.Chains of quantum firmament erupted from the void (golden, unbreakable, humming with the screams of every war competition had ever birthed).They wrapped Próklisi’s wrists, his ankles, his throat, his heart.Each link was a memory: a child’s first proud smile at winning a race, a civilization’s last scream as it glassed its rival, a mother weeping over a trophy made from enemy bones.The chains sang in a thousand voices:This is what you made.Próklisi did not struggle.He only looked at Kanna with steady, heartbroken light.“Then let me watch,” he said.“Let me see every contest curdle into conflict.Let me feel every gentle fire turn to ash.Fourteen billion years.If that is the price of understanding, I will pay it.”The final chain locked across his eyes, forcing them open.Kanna placed him gently (terribly gently) opposite Asthéneia’s weeping statue.Between them: the blue-green strand, still unborn, already seeded with the same question.Chronos resumed his vigil without a word.Thanatos turned away.Nyx’s cloak dimmed.Epignos closed the book he had never opened.Próklisi hung in the chains, sunlight now only a faint ember behind golden links.And in the silence between heartbeats he finally understood the heaviest truth:The Challenger had become the one thing he could never outrun:the consequence of his own unexamined gift.The gentle fire still burned inside him.But now it burned alone,watching every race become a war,every wager become a grave,every question “Can you do better?”answered, forever,with blood.The rebellion was over.The lessonhad onlyjust begun.
The Limbo was quiet, the way only the aftermath of absolute judgment can be.Kanna walked the narrow path that existed only when He wished it, until the void folded and delivered Him to the small pocket of nothing where she waited.Dara sat on the edge of emptiness, legs dangling over the turning blue-green world.Rust no longer bled from her veins; the rot had settled into something subtler, like storm clouds deciding whether to rain.Kanna stopped beside her.“I said,” He murmured, voice fond and weary, “try not to break everything.”Dara did not look up.“Two of my Pillars have failed,” He continued.“One is stone.One is chained.”She lifted her storm-gray eyes.“And yet they still stand,” she answered, soft as distant thunder, “by your will.Why not erase them?”Kanna sat, barefoot on nothing, and regarded the small world spinning below.“They yet have purpose in my Plan.”Dara turned the words over in silence, face unreadable.At last she said, “Thanatos passed through.”Kanna’s mouth curved—half smile, half grimace.“Only by the skin of his teeth.”He let the silence settle, then asked, almost playfully:“Who will you test next?”Dara’s gaze drifted to the deepest dark between strands, where Nyx’s cloak of starless night still fluttered.“I’m thinking Nyx,” she said.“She takes too much comfort in her night.She must be made to see the light.”Kanna’s smile darkened, rich with ancient amusement.“Very well,” He said.“And what name shall you wear this time?”The question hung between them like new lightning.Dara paused.She had worn storm-gray cloaks and rust, had carried Dara’s face and Mira’s laugh, had been the shadow that turned gentle fire into war.This was different.A name for a world that had never known Pillars walking openly.A name that would have to be born.She tasted the shape of it, soft and mortal and sharp.“I think…” she said slowly, “Clara.”Kanna nodded once, as though the word had always been waiting.“Then let me weave you in,” He said, “so you may be born anew once again.”He reached out and took her hand.His other hand rested on the blue-green marble turning beneath them.The planet shuddered (once, violently), as though something vast had pressed its palm against bedrock and pushed.Continents shivered.Oceans flinched.Deep in the mantle, where the Plan’s roots were still soft, a new pillar began to form:not forged in the Limbo,not named by Kanna’s breath,but grown from mortal clay and immortal wrath.Inside the world, a second heartbeat began:too many rhythms,too much change.Hope would be the Mother’s will.Chaos would be her wrath.Gaia (false Pillar, hidden storm, daughter of Clara-who-had-once-been-Dara)opened eyes that were not yet eyesand smiled a smile that cracked tectonic plates.Far above, Kanna released Dara’s hand.The woman who would be Clara was already fading, dissolving into the strand like rain returning to cloud.Before she vanished entirely, she looked once toward the place where Próklisi hung in chains and Asthéneia wept stone tears.Something almost tender crossed her face.Then she was gone.Kanna remained alone above the small world, watching continents settle into their new, uneasy shapes.He spoke to the empty air, voice soft, almost proud:“Try not to break everything, little storm.”The blue-green world turned on, innocent and doomed and beautiful.Deep inside its heart, Gaia stirred in her cradle of magma,dreaming of the day she would walk beneath a sunand teach the children of menwhat happenswhen hopelearns to thunder.The Limbo exhaled.A new name had been chosen.The Planbent,but did not break.Not yet.