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Próklisi

John Heemeyer

Jan 16, 2025

Challenger’s Heart - ACT 3

Act 3: Playing with Chaos

After Aerithar Próklisi drifted through the fringe of Limbo, crimson cloak trailing behind him like molten sunlight. Twice now his competition had been turned to conflict. Twice now he had been beaten. He needed a distraction. Not a mortal challenge this time. Not another world to push toward greatness.

He needed something that would test himself. He needed chaos he could try to shape. So he would be prepared the next time she appeared…

He found that challenge in the child-like pillar Eriselpis. He found her on a shattered moon orbiting a world of ice. The moon’s surface was a fractured mosaic of glass and crystal, remnants of some ancient cataclysm. Eriselpis danced across the broken landscape like a flame dancing between leaves. Her hair was a riot of nebulae and tangles, her body flickering between harmony and beautiful discord. She laughed as she spun, arms wide, sending ripples of wild energy outward.

Everywhere she stepped, chaos bloomed. A crater filled with liquid starlight suddenly exploded into a fountain of singing colors. A field of crystalline flowers burst into flame, then bloomed again as glass butterflies. The very gravity of the moon stuttered… one moment pulling downward, the next flipping sideways so Eriselpis could cartwheel through the air.

Próklisi landed lightly on a jagged outcrop, arms crossed, sunburst mask gleaming. “You’re making a mess again,” he called, voice ringing like struck bronze.

Eriselpis spun mid-air, eyes bright with delight. “Golden brother!” she sang. “Come play! Everything is better when it breaks a little!” She flicked her wrist. A nearby mountain of glass shattered into a thousand floating shards, each one reflecting a different possible future… no, showing windows into this strand’s different presents.

Próklisi stepped forward, golden light flaring around him. “No,” he said as gently as he could, though it still sounded a bit too stern to Eriselpis. “Not this time. I’m not here to watch you break things. I’m here to see if I can guide the breaking.”

Eriselpis tilted her head, curious. “Guide chaos?” she asked, genuinely puzzled. “That sounds… boring.”

“It sounds like a challenge,” he replied, a spark of his old fire returning. “For me. Not for mortals. Let’s see if I can turn your storms into something better.”

Eriselpis grinned, wild and delighted. “Okay!” she said. “Try!” She clapped her hands. The moon answered. Gravity inverted completely. The floating glass shards became a deadly hailstorm, slicing through the thin atmosphere. Cracks raced across the surface, releasing plumes of glowing gas that ignited into auroras of pure madness.

Próklisi moved. He raised both hands and wove rings of solid wind… golden hurricane loops that caught the glass shards mid-flight. Instead of letting them destroy, he redirected them, forcing the shards to orbit in perfect, controlled spirals. Where they passed, they carved beautiful, deliberate patterns into the moon’s surface… not random destruction, but art born from chaos.

Eriselpis laughed with pure joy. “You’re cheating!” she cried joyfully. “You’re making it pretty!”

“That’s the point,” Próklisi answered, voice steady even as he worked. “Destruction is easy. Turning destruction into something greater, that’s hard.”

He pushed harder. The glowing gas plumes were caught in his golden rings and reshaped into towering, luminous spires that stood defiant against the inverted gravity. Where Eriselpis’s chaos had threatened to tear the moon apart, Próklisi forced it to rebuild. stronger, more intricate, more beautiful.

For the first time in a long while, he felt the pure thrill of a challenge aimed at himself. Eriselpis watched him, eyes sparkling. “You’re good at this,” she admitted, drifting closer. “Most people just run away from my storms. You try to dance inside them.”

Próklisi allowed himself a small, satisfied smile behind the mask. “I’m learning,” he said. They spent what might have been days, weeks, maybe even years… together on the broken moon. Eriselpis would unleash waves of beautiful chaos, and Próklisi would follow, trying to guide, redirect, and transform the destruction into creation.

Sometimes he succeeded brilliantly. Sometimes the chaos slipped through his fingers and left glittering wreckage behind. Each failure taught him something new. Each success felt like victory. But slowly, Eriselpis began to pull back. One day, as they rested on a newly formed crystal plateau, she looked at him with unusual seriousness. “I like having you here,” she said softly. “You make the chaos feel… purposeful. I have learned much here, but I need to learn to grow by myself. If my brothers are always cleaning up after me, I’ll never get better at making beautiful storms on my own. I want to share this with the mortals, without them being afraid.”

Próklisi was quiet for a long moment. Then he nodded. “I understand.”

Eriselpis smiled… small, genuine, almost shy. She floated closer, rose onto her toes, and kissed his cheek… light as summer thunder, warm as hope. The kiss tingled against his golden skin like a question he wasn’t ready to answer. “Thank you for playing with me,” she whispered. Then she stepped back, hair swirling with nebulae and lightning. “See you around, golden brother.”

She vanished in a burst of chaotic light, leaving only sparkling afterimages and the faint sound of laughter. Próklisi stood alone on the crystal plateau, touching the place where her lips had brushed his cheek. The kiss felt strangely familiar. It reminded him of his duty. It reminded him of the challenge that still waited. He turned toward the weave. A new tug pulled at him, sharp, insistent, calling him to a world of stone and silence. Zorath. Próklisi’s crimson cloak flared as he stepped forward. The distraction had been good. But the real challenge still lay ahead.

 

Próklisi stepped onto Zorath. Its surface was a fractured expanse of stone, broken by those few trees able to find purchase in the cracks. Nearby geothermal vents hissed sulfur into the air, as if responding to his sudden arrival. The Zorathim lived here… frail, chitinous beings no taller than a child’s waist, their exoskeletons pale and brittle, their many limbs delicate. They moved slowly, carefully, as though the world itself might shatter them if they dared move too quickly.

They had always been weak. They had always accepted it. Until the golden stranger arrived. Próklisi stepped onto the largest plateau of the Broken Spine, his crimson cloak rippling in the hot wind. His sunburst mask gleamed brighter than the vents below. The Zorathim gathered in a wide circle, their faceted eyes clicking with wary curiosity. A single word pulsed like a wave through their clicking, “Outsider.”

Próklisi raised both hands, palms open. “I am Próklisi,” he said, voice ringing like a bell being struck. “I am Challenge. I have come to offer you strength.”

The Zorathim shifted uneasily. Their limbs trembled. “Strength?” one chittered and clicked, “We are fragile, we break easily.”

Próklisi smiled behind his mask. “Then learn not to break yourself, but to break what threatens to break you.” He gestured to a boulder the size of a small house. With a single motion, he lifted it, not with his hands, but with raw presence, and set it gently before them. “Lift,” he said. “Break. Build. Compete. Discover what you can become when you refuse to remain weak.”

The Zorathim hesitated… then one stepped forward. Its tiny limbs strained. Its carapace creaked. But slowly, impossibly, the boulder rose a few inches from the ground before crashing back down. A ripple of awe spread through the colony. Próklisi laughed, bright, encouraging, impossible to resist. “Again,” he said. “Harder. Together.”

The challenge took root. For weeks the plateau rang with effort. The Zorathim lifted stones, pushed boulders, learned to work in unison. Their frail bodies grew stronger through sheer will. They began carving the stone, learning the difference between granite, basalt and marble. They began shaping crude tools, then better ones. They built small towers, then larger ones.

Competition was gentle at first… who could lift the heaviest rock, who could stack the tallest pile. It was everything competition was meant to be. Then she appeared. But this time Próklisi was ready. She drifted down from the sulfurous wind like a shadow given form, a simple storm-gray cloak, bare feet, hair moving like living lightning. Her eyes were the color of thunderheads before rain.

She moved among the Zorathim, speaking softly. This time Próklisi chose to ignore her, but to listen to what she said so he could build upon her words to maintain the peace and the competition. “…why settle for lifting what you can already move?” she whispered. “Look inside the stone. There is iron there. Iron that can be shaped. Iron that can cut.”

The Zorathim paused. Their faceted eyes clicked. One of them struck the boulder harder than before. It cracked open, revealing a vein of dark ore. Mira smiled… small, sad, knowing. “See?” she said. “Strength is not just lifting. Strength is taking.” Weapons were made. Crude at first, sharp flakes of obsidian bound to chitin hafts. Then better ones. Then spears. Then blades.

Próklisi saw the shift and moved to counter it. He gathered the Zorathim and showed them how to work the metal properly. How to build forges that used the geothermal vents, how to shape iron into beams and supports. He challenged them to build greater and larger structures, towers that scraped the sulfurous sky, bridges that spanned chasms.

“Build,” he urged. “Let your strength serve creation, not destruction.” For a time, it worked. Towers rose. Bridges spanned. The Zorathim sang with pride as they worked.

But Mira moved among them again, whispering. “…why build for others when you can build to protect what is yours?”“…why share when you can claim?”“…who is truly stronger — the one who builds, or the one who breaks?”

The towers became fortresses. The bridges became choke points. The tools of creation became weapons of war. The Zorathim turned on one another. Small skirmishes at first — disputes over ore veins, over building sites. Then larger ones. Then battles.

Próklisi tried to stop it. He raised both hands and forced the iron tools to melt back into slag, but the Zorathim had already learned. They fought with claws and teeth and broken stone when metal failed them. The plateau ran red. At the climax of the largest battle, Dara stood at the center, watching calmly.

Próklisi approached her from behind. Not to surprise her, but to talk. She heard him approach, and spun, ready to counter his assault, surprised when none came.

“Again you have appeared, and again you have twisted my competition into conflict. How you have lived this long is beyond me, how you travel between the strands equally so. but you are already a worthy rival, you need not immortality for that recognition, for you are a rival worthy of me.”

Mira paused. This was clearly not what she was expecting. She approached him cautiously, raising a hand to gently brush his cheek as she spoke, “Then why not grant me immortality, so we may be rivals until the Humans remem…” her voice is cut short. Her eyes go wide, and blood drips from her lips.

Próklisi catches her as she collapses. A stray spear, crude, but lethal, had moved unseen by either and struck her from behind, through her heart. She gasped… a small, mortal sound. Blood, dark and warm, spilled across her storm-gray cloak. Próklisi lowers her gently to the ground. Her storm-colored eyes looked up at him, strangely peaceful. “You wanted them to care who was strongest,” she whispered. “Now they do.” She smiled… small, sad, knowing. “But they are not who you should be concerned…” Her breathing was ragged, uneven, as she tried to speak. “…with. Beware… Humans… final trial…” Then her life-thread faded from the strand as cleanly as a cut string. She was gone, her body but an empty shell. Próklisi remained kneeling, golden hands stained with mortal blood.

Around him, the Zorathim continued fighting. No longer for pride, but for survival, for dominance, for the right to be the last one standing. He stood slowly. The crimson light in his cloak dimmed. He looked at the battlefield… once a place of hopeful effort, of creation, now a wasteland of ash and iron. The sky was choked with smoke from the great furnaces that never stopped burning.

He turned away. The challenge had been answered. Not with growth, but with blood. And somewhere in the void, a question remained. Could anyone ask “Can you do better?” without someone eventually answering with war. Próklisi stepped back into the weave, carrying Zorath’s endless war in his heart. The gentle fire of competition had flickered once more with something colder.

 

© 2016-2019 by John Heemeyer and the DECIDE crew.

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